What do you think of this one? Is it any better? The picture isn't even in the centre!

Are the framing colours from the painting? No, and so the frame spoils the picture. The five different lines around the painting look great - but the mat and frame are wrong. The black line around the art, the wider white, then narrow black are good - it just needs different colours of mat and frame.

This is another example of how NOT to frame your art.